My Phone Magazine *center spread* design

Salam
This's my magazine center spread design.

~Design 1~

First design, rasa teruk sangat. takada idea~

~Design 2~

Alhamdulillah sudah punya idea tapi masih tampak kosong~simple

~Designs 3~

Hanya tambah vector bulat-bulat dan Alhamdulillah saya dapat 8/10.. :)

Shahira Khir